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Writing Clear, Concise Explanations, a free language course on Tomo

Writing Clear, Concise Explanations

Learn to diagnose verbal bloat, strip unnecessary clutter, and compress complex explanations without losing meaning. Master surgical editing techniques that make your writing punchy, direct, and effortless to read.

Like Duolingo, but for Writing Clear, Concise Explanations. Tomo turns the whole topic into a game you play five minutes a day, until it actually sticks.

21 levels across 4 sections, about 42 minutes end to end, roughly 8 days at five minutes a day. It moves through Immediate Cuts and Sentence Pruning, Rebuilding Sentence Architecture, Streamlining Explanations and Arguments, and The Self-Editing Discipline. It assumes you already know the basics.

21 bite-size levelsAbout 5 minutes each

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Writing Clear, Concise Explanations
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21
Levels
4
Sections
5
Min/day
What you'll learn

Key ideas in Writing Clear, Concise Explanations

  • Throat-clearing openers cushion the assertion without adding meaning to the sentence.
  • Cutting introductory stock padding leaves the primary subject and verb immediately exposed and functional.
  • Chaining prepositions like 'of', 'from', and 'regarding' forces the reader to track nested relationships.
  • Converting prepositional objects into possessive nouns or modifying adjectives compresses the clause instantly.
  • Multi-word formulas like 'due to the fact that' add dead syllables without altering causality.
  • Single direct conjunctions and prepositions preserve precise functional logic at a fraction of the length.
  • Intensifiers like 'completely' weaken absolute words like 'essential' and waste reader bandwidth.
  • Uncalibrated hedges like 'actually' and 'essentially' soften explanations while signaling authorial hesitation.
  • A pleonasm pairs two words where the definition of one already subsumes the other.
  • Modifiers that repeat inherent properties—such as 'past' before 'history'—double syllable count for zero gain.
  • Nominalizations trap the sentence's real action inside abstract nouns like 'conclusion'
  • Trapping action in a noun forces you to insert dull helper verbs like 'came to' or 'reached'
  • Unburying the verb cuts the helper verb and puts the primary action directly into the predicate
  • Suffixes like -tion, -ment, and -ance reliably signal verbs converted into abstract nouns
  • Targeting words with these endings reveals where actions like 'comply' or 'develop' are hidden
  • Sentences using direct verbs like 'approved' or 'explained' keep the action unimpeded
Why not just Google it

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YouTube

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One answer, then back to scrolling.

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Eight weeks. You meant to finish. You didn't.

Tomo gives Writing Clear, Concise Explanations the Duolingo treatment: levels, streaks, and quick quizzes that test what you just learned. That game loop is what the tabs above never had, so it's the one you actually finish.

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Cutting the Extra Words

What is the problem with stacking prepositions like 'of', 'from', and 'regarding' in a single line?

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How to learn Writing Clear, Concise Explanations, step by step

Go in order. 21 short levels across 4 sections, about 42 minutes in all, five minutes a day.

  1. 1

    Immediate Cuts and Sentence Pruning

    • Slashing Sentence-Level Clutter
    • Uncovering Buried Verbs
  2. 2

    Rebuilding Sentence Architecture

    • Tightening Clauses and Connectors
    • Choosing High-Leverage Vocabulary
  3. 3

    Streamlining Explanations and Arguments

    • Overcoming Defensive and Over-Explaining Tics
    • Paragraph Structure and Information Density
  4. 4

    The Self-Editing Discipline

    • Systematic Compression Workflows

4 sections · 7 units · 21 levels. Built to play, not to enroll.

Questions

Questions about Writing Clear, Concise Explanations

  1. How do I learn Writing Clear, Concise Explanations?

    Go in order: start with Immediate Cuts and Sentence Pruning, then Rebuilding Sentence Architecture, then Streamlining Explanations and Arguments, then The Self-Editing Discipline. On Tomo that's 21 short levels, about 42 minutes in all, played five minutes a day. Start free and play the first level in under a minute.

  2. Is there a Duolingo-style app for Writing Clear, Concise Explanations?

    Yes. Tomo works like Duolingo: short daily lessons, streaks and quick quizzes. Writing Clear, Concise Explanations is one of its free courses, and you can type any other topic to get a course of your own.

  3. Is the Writing Clear, Concise Explanations course free?

    Yes. Writing Clear, Concise Explanations is playable on Tomo's free plan, which doesn't expire. No credit card, no waitlist. Download the app and start your first lesson.

  4. How long does it take to learn Writing Clear, Concise Explanations?

    21 levels across 4 sections, about 42 minutes of play in total. It's built for five minutes a day, so you finish it a little at a time instead of all at once.

  5. Do I need any background to start Writing Clear, Concise Explanations?

    No. It's pitched at an intermediate level, so it starts where you are and builds up. If you can tap a phone, you can start.

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